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主题鲜明，格调自然流畅，欣赏好诗，国庆节快乐。

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欣赏组诗，国庆节快乐

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2 楼        文友：原上草A        2013-10-06 10:28:55

 

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一组词，直抒胸臆，流畅自然，每一阕都与所用词牌字数相合，字里行间流露着作者对古韵的挚爱之情。切记，要填好传统古词，最低标准是要依谱和韵，平仄完美。

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这组律诗，写景抒情，蕴藉哲理，有两个病句：“酒杯篱边诗思雅”、“著作愧无千篇富”，影响整体完美。

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一组七言古风，游览抒怀，哲思蕴藉，出手不凡，推荐欣赏。注意韵脚，期待精彩

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